Lemon

Something I wrote venting some feelings and such

Well I've got a lemon and two kiwis

A sunny day and some bruised knees

From last night out by your car

In the deep dark of that cloudy night

"Hey baby come on do it again"

You plead and down I go

Good thing I know you like it nice and slow

Do you love me honey?

You need me to stick around?

Do I make your heart feel good?

All I need is to hear it out loud

Do you love me honey?

Well I've got some juicy strawberries

A hot, humid day and a little key

You gave me last night before I left

So I can rest and come and go as I please

"You can sleep next to me"

You whispered in my ear

So quietly only the wind could hear

Do you love me honey?

You need me to stick around?

Do I make your heart feel good?

All I need is to hear it out loud

Do you love me honey?

Well I've got a peanut butter, banana sandwich

A rainy day and some groggy, tired eyes

From staying up crying all night

Oh all those horrid things you said to me

"Baby I don't know how I really feel"

Just playing around

You've got plenty of time to settle down

And it's unbearable

This guessing game you make me play

How long before we fall apart?

I'm counting down the days

Do you love me honey?

You need me to stick around?

Do I make your heart feel good?

All I need is to hear it out loud

Do you love me honey?

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Are you starting off the poem with a blowjob? All the references are there and you like to swear, so I feel the need to push that question out of my skull!! lol The rest of the poem sounds stressful to your heart, as if he is not reciprocating what you are trying to give him...... except for that possible blowjob. : ) I wonder how many guys have said "I Love You" with a beautiful girl going down on them, and how many wanted to offer up a ring to the one who swallows!! : ) It's a playful, raw, teenage poem that most on here, in general, will be able to relate to easily. xoxo -Mark

[Megan]

Yes I am starting out the poem with a blowjob lol.

[Patrick Henry]

Well..... I Love your blowjob. It's beautiful and it was memorable in many ways!! lol xoxox -Mark

[Emrick]

I think love n doubt go together. or wat do u think?.when in love you always doubt if your partner really loves you.everytime you feel like asking him/her if he do u loves you.
its a preety poem.