Nightmare

Hey there baby it's nice to hear from you again

I feel like I'm 

Exalting this pleasure

Of exalting displeasure

Exalting discomfort

And all of the times

I can't seem to measure

Up to your standards

Like I'm melting away

To make way

For you to replace me

With something disgusting 

Forget me

And cross me

Off your list of things 

To violate

And contaminate

With nothing but hate

While all I can hate

Is you

And your voice

It's like nails

On a chalk board

And all of your lies

And all of the times

You did nothing but try

To tear me down

Shut me out

F**k me up 

While I hung up 

The phone 

To rid myself

To kid myself

Into believing

This would be something

Go on and hit me

And see if you live

Cause I'll leave you for dead

Wishing for death

Wishing you had never met me

Cause I'd love to be 

You're nightmare 

Author's Note

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[Jupiter Jazz]

Emotions I'm getting: bitterness and anger with the need for vengeance.

"And all of the times
You did nothing but try
To tear me down
Shut me out
F**k me up
While I hung up
The phone
To rid myself
To kid myself
Into believing
This would be something
Go on and hit me
And see if you live
Cause I'll leave you for dead
Wishing for death
Wishing you had never met me
Cause I'd love to be
You're nightmare "

Most powerful lines. Love the ending

[rt farris]

whew! your mind is like the door to your heart. don't open it until you're sure who the heck is knocking. i feel the pain and hurt and anger in your poem. it resonates with emotion. an effective piece of work.