Self-Awareness

This is how I really am...?

Thick headed

A troubled youth is all I am

Troubled soul

Troubled mind

That's just how I began

I came from the womb

Defective, damaged

On the brink 

Of crashing

Just a letdown

A washout

Help from me

Isn't worth anything

Egotistical

And self-serving

Apathy 

Is my middle name

Along with vain

Lets not forget needy 

 A hinderance to all around me 

So leave 

Before you become my next casualty 

 

Reviews

[Jupiter Jazz]

A little hard on yourself there, ain't ya? Bitterness is just one of the emotions I get from this. Don't know who put you down with such hateful words, but don't let it get to you. I'm sure you're no where near as bad as you make yourself out to be. I refuse to believe someone who could write such heart felt words could be bad person =)

[deeps]

I came from the womb
Defective, damaged

Like this part, i often thought this myself,
I like this it's sad but well written.

[Brenden Moran]

Ok. So I tried reading this a few times and couldn't get through it. Presentation is the first battle in attracting readers. You're over thinking this a bit too much. Less is more. Simplicity. Plus I don't even know where to start. Which is kind of an awkward problem...then where to go from there.