Monday Night

just another memory of you to add to my collection

The lamplight 

Spilling across you 

In the night

You're arms thrown around me

Like you'll never let me go

Soft breathing 

And kissing 

Touching, and caressing

While rain falls on the rooftop

A lovely rhythm 

To hide our whispering

Of I love yous 

While we rest

In the cool sheets

You run you're fingers though my hair

And I share

All my thoughts with you

Silly things 

And serious things

That mean the world to me

You take in every word

Keeping every secret

Telling me I'm your world

And sharing this small moment

That to some mean nothing

While they mean everything

To the ones who can see them 

For what they're for

You pass me the vodka

And I turn on the TV

Soon we're laughing

At new inside jokes

That we'll take to our graves

And remember

While we're here 

In this life

In this day

Just young and foolish

Carefree and selfish 

I wouldn't change this for the world

Reviews

[prodicallife]

Megan
One thing i would like to say you imagine so beautifully everything, i love the way you described that scene.
This scene one can easily relate to him/herself, it`s a complete poem describing when the two loving souls meet and converse with each other this is so beautifull
APPERICIATION

Regards
PRODICAL

[Rohan Tandon]

Beautiful poem..... very descriptive and amazing..... I love how you are able to appreciate the smallest of things, things that some just look past... u've captured it all here, all its simple beauty..... thnx 4 sharing...

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Loving the scene taking place in my head as I read, it's like I am there lol!!! you captured it so beautifully :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Love this write. Very sweet and romantic...xx

[Allen Smuckler]

why would you? (change this for the world..that is)
This was beautifully written with clarity and insight...Your imagery carried me from beginning to end....and I loved the ride...
allen
no moment is too small, when in love...

[LittleMissSunshine :)]

Although there were some points where your flow was a little jerky, this poem was absolutely breathtaking.
Every word was extremely precise, and utterly descriptive.
Congragulation on being able to describe so much in such little wording :)