Monday Night

just another memory of you to add to my collection

The lamplight 

Spilling across you 

In the night

You're arms thrown around me

Like you'll never let me go

Soft breathing 

And kissing 

Touching, and caressing

While rain falls on the rooftop

A lovely rhythm 

To hide our whispering

Of I love yous 

While we rest

In the cool sheets

You run you're fingers though my hair

And I share

All my thoughts with you

Silly things 

And serious things

That mean the world to me

You take in every word

Keeping every secret

Telling me I'm your world

And sharing this small moment

That to some mean nothing

While they mean everything

To the ones who can see them 

For what they're for

You pass me the vodka

And I turn on the TV

Soon we're laughing

At new inside jokes

That we'll take to our graves

And remember

While we're here 

In this life

In this day

Just young and foolish

Carefree and selfish 

I wouldn't change this for the world

Reviews

[prodicallife]

Megan
One thing i would like to say you imagine so beautifully everything, i love the way you described that scene.
This scene one can easily relate to him/herself, it`s a complete poem describing when the two loving souls meet and converse with each other this is so beautifull
APPERICIATION

Regards
PRODICAL

[~ Stefanie ~]

I absolutely loved this poem! So playful, romantic, and full fo emotion. It was wonderfully written and had a great flow to it. It kept me drawn in throughout and I could easily picture the scene unfolding as if it were right before my eyes.
Great job!

[Kat Collins]

How sweet a love to share with someone special. We should cherish the small moments in every thing we do. They are what add up to the big moments. I love the flow of the poem. It has a light swaying rhthym that is pleasing tumbling from the lips. Enjoyed it.

[Zachary_James]

Amazing poem Megan, so romantic loved it.

[Antonio Valentino]

how great it is to be young...

this was gorgeous, really enjoyed it.

Antonio :)

[Jeremy Baker]

Nicely crafted and controlled - very sensual as well.

[Chris]

The "Afterstaste" being shared...
well said.

Chris

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Precious moments.
This feeling is priceless.

[Luke Ritta]

loved reading this...very, very good poem....keep up the good work!

[ecept]

wonderful write, well said feelings.

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and beautiful,
I really enjoyed your write.