A Moment To Be Real

it's sad they way some people live they're lives..blind to the wondrous things around them

sometimes I wish I could just take this hole that's in my chest and place it inside someone so they can really feel what i'm trying to make them feel. 

cause i've tried so hard to make them understand..it doesn't matter how many songs I right, how much music i'll compose, how many poems i write, they'll never feel the hole that's built up inside me longing to filled. 

they've told me to fill it with religion, and they've told me to fill it with love.

they've told me to fill it with drugs and they've told me to feel it with books and poetry and everything under the sun. 

but it seems no matter how hard i try it never gets filled. 

sometimes i think if I jump from the highest cliff it will stop the ache in the moments before I hit the ground.

 I have this desire that's burning right through me. 

this need to be complete, but i'm never complete. 

I just want that one moment when everything seems right with the world and it's just pure bliss. 

like magic. 

so everyone can see me for who i really am and see the hole and see the ache that is residing in me and see how much i hurt, but know in that one blissful moment it was filled and that it can be filled and that i'll be okay. 

they'll know the world wont fall apart tomorrow and they don't have to have sorrow, they can have peace, they don't have to have happiness, they can have joy. 

it will be like a huge orchestra playing the final stanza in the most beautiful song they've ever heard and it will capture them and take them away to a place that they've never been before, perfectly elated. 

Like they were looking down on the world and seeing how magnificent it really was. 

seeing it for miles and miles and miles, never-ending, and laughing because there was no greater feeling than that feeling at that moment. 

I want people to feel that and i want to feel that and just let everything be right with the world for one moment, for one second, and time will just stop and you can absorb that one moment and hold on to it for what would be like centuries even though it would just be seconds. 

just perfection. 

i want that more than anything. 

just that one moment so i can say that the hole inside me was filled even for a blissful, passionate, wonderful moment. 

a crescendo of life at it's greatest. 

like flying close to the sun. 

like swimming in the deepest sea.

 like quiet and peace and divine noise and a raging storm all captured together at once. 

like everything was going to fall apart but felt like nothing else seemed more right. 

i just want that second. 

then everyone will know what we truly have and cherish it forever.

 i want heart stopping, jaw dropping, pure realization.  

Author's Note

what do you think? I know it seems a bit cheesy, but it popped in my head and who am I to deny my muse?

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

A fantastic work of ink, taking us on a ride through sweeping emotions, idealistic vistas and the human need to hope for perfection, wherever it hides.
I loved the form and flow to this piece and how it really shines with description and visual flavors.

Wonderful Ink
Wolfie

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The emotion is there, but seems you can relate your thoughts and condense this a bit more... Look through your lines and focus on what is needed and delete what is not... You got lots going on here with this prose... and let me know the final outcome... Thanks for the read...

[deeps]

Very emotional, and so well expressed.