The Pit

Going to a local show to relieve some pint up rage and this is what I hope to see

Here it comes

That feeling again 

Bubbling up in my stomach 

With every beat

Of the double bass drum

Like Lava

Destroying everything in it's path

Causing shaking hands

So I step in the pit

Oh damn

I feel like drop kicking someone

Sounds like rounds

Being fired off 

Of a tommy gun 

Nothing but hands and feet

Bloody noses and bruises 

Elbows thrown 

To stop the on coming

Cascade of bodies

Threatening to take them all 

With me

To the vey bottom of my rage

God it feels so good

To release this monster 

Inside me

Another song please

Author's Note

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

As the monster screams for Blood, Rage, and Relief, the mistress knows whom is in control


Nice.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Nothing like letting go at a show to get all the tension out... a very fun piece of writing.

[joshua deathdealer]

I feel like drop kicking someone lol I love it. Excellent work. The pit is my favorite place to be. xx

[prodicallife]

great job...the best thing was the comparision of the inner feelings to that bursting volcano and flowing lava.....

great flow, the entire scene i could imagine best part out of it.
great going

Regards
PRODICAL

[Grakercub]

nothing like a good mosh pit to get fucked up in. Righteous stuff. listen to OFWGKTA. i think you'd like their stuff, if you haven't already gotten your hands on it.

[Call It A Day]

Get it, girl. Release that monster. (trying to be sassy, failing dismally)