[Return, return, my love, to me]

[Return, return, my love, to me]

Return, return, my love, to me

That we might once again delight

In all the beauty of the night

And listen to the melody

Of the wind as it plays upon 

The grass and with the leaves entwines --

And watch the whirling world-designs

As stars and moons and planets wander

Round and round Heaven's dome.

Return -- and remember there's no end

In all the universe -- nor end

To the fire of the soul -- that home

Is within us -- as travel we

The valleys below and hills above --

Ever receiving the gifts of love

In pure celestial poetry.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Oh I like the thought of 'celestial poetry', well done my friend. Have a great New Year!

[Firestone Feinberg]

Thank you dear Frieda. You are a celestial poet! Have a great 2014!

[New Dawn]

Lovely smooth natural rhyme and rhythm, reads almost musically. There is a magical quality to this piece. Really enjoyed it x

[Firestone Feinberg]

i am so glad you enjoyed reading it. It was one of those ones that just flew out! I love when that happens. Thank you for your appreciation --David

[Lydia Shutter]

A celestial beauty of a write. The rhythm and rhyme are spectacular. I read it aloud and the cadence was sensational. The imagery is lovely. I enjoyed this one. Lydi**

[Firestone Feinberg]

Thank you so much for your enthusiastic review! Made my day! Hope all is well --David

[bobc]

D...good pacing in this piece. The rhymes feel natural and uncontrived which, to my mind, is always important if rhyme is being used. (It would seem Thanksgiving has made you wax a little philosophical.) ...bobc

[Firestone Feinberg]

hi bob, i agree with you about rhyme -- it is difficult to make it work. thanks for reviewing. hope all is well. --d

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[bobc]

Getting better. Internet issue is still around but we're working on it. Might even be working today...who knows?!