Another note of sadness sounds

b''h 

20 Oct 2013

Another note of sadness sounds

As someone goes from here --

Across the bridge -- beyond the bounds --

Transcendent and unknown...

So slowly comes a melody

Defying catch by ear

Though carried in tranquility --

Eternally alone.

Firestone Feinberg

Reviews

[bobc]

D...yes to this one. An unusual rhyme scheme too. I don't usually care for rhyme all that much...seems too obvious to my ear...but this one is so different and subtle. Well done...bobc

[Firestone Feinberg]

Yeah. I was trying to do something a little different with the rhymes. Glad you like it. Hope all is well in DR. --D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i can feel their journey with this piece...wow, you really are vivid in the picture you paint..the passing over of a spirit in death..that lonely journey for both that person and also those left behind.

[Firestone Feinberg]

You amaze me Jacob. You understand me better than I understand myself. Thank you. --D