Seems I've run out of rhymes and

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9 Oct 2013

Seems I've run out of rhymes and

Even meter I mean I don't know

Where they went but I know they

Ran away to somewhere where they

Can hide from me I guess I sound

Paranoid like this whole thing

About f*****g words deserting

Me and all I mean you might

Think I've finally crossed the

Border of here and gone there you

Know what I mean it's the

Wilderness we're talking about I

Mean I'm talking about because

You're not doing any of the

Talking it's just me and you

Know what I'm kinda tired of

All this traveling and these

Days I don't feel like chasing words.

D L Firestone Feinberg

Reviews

[Dye]

Oh...this made me laugh and I feel like I can relate to this most days. Your style of writing with the pauses and the stanzas, made me feel like I was listening to you talk to yourself like you implied. Enjoyable, fun and easy to read.

[Firestone Feinberg]

Thank you so much, Dye, for your exuberant review and your kind words. --David