Another day this to be given a chance --

b"h

30 aug 2013

Another day this to be given a chance --

To ride on the carousel -- laugh at the horse --

Who lives on a turntable trying to prance --

Without ever leaving his up-and-down course --

And just like the carousel-horses are we --

Living our lives -- dreaming our dreams --

Imagining travel -- we dare -- so it seems --

Challenge -- -- Reality -- --

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Yes...there is life besides the carousel of stationery...you can pick yourself up and leave the thing that goes round and round...

[Firestone Feinberg]

Thanks Glen. Would be nice to get off the carousel, eh?

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Well, next time just fall off it...where you land might hurt...but you will feel better later on...and continue the journey...u r welcome...

[bobc]

D...somehow, I get the feeling you might like to really travel a bit. Thanx...bobc

[Firestone Feinberg]

Hey Bob I don't understand your comment, but thank you for making it! --David

[bobc]

I think maybe I read something into the second stanza with the '...Living our lives -- dreaming our dreams --/Imagining travel --...'. Or maybe I've just missed this completely. ...boc

[Firestone Feinberg]

my failure to get the point across...

[bobc]

Don't be too quick with taking on 'failure' here. I'm not the sharpest knife in the drawer, after all.

[Firestone Feinberg]

that makes two of us