a rough road it is...

a rough road it is...

A Poem by Firestone Feinberg

b"h
7/11/13


A rough road it is, young man, and I cannot
Tell you where it begins or where it ends.
Nor do I know how you will find it -- nor
How you will know that it is the way you
Are to go.  All I can say is that you are 
Bright and that the light is in your eyes and
That you are wise and kind and you are open -- 
And that you feel deeply and well...  And that

You will find your way.  And it will be a
Special way...  That you will travel far -- and
That the horizon will be your home.  And
Yes -- you will go alone.  For such is the way of
One who sees.  Such is the tough travel of
Life itself.  Be strong, son, and of good courage.

© 2013 Firestone Feinberg


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Reads as a piece of sage advice for a loved one about to embark on an unknown journey. As much as we wish to protect and steer our young in the right direction, ultimately we all choose our own path. A great piece of writing David - loved the fact of not knowing where the path begins, ends or even in which direction it is going.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very strong and moving. I enjoyed this piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


courage and persistence allows us to find our way...and nobody can find it for us...

great philosophy, nicely written piece, David.


jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

11 Years Ago

likewise, David, i am glad to have met you on same road...but geez...how long can i expect you to ho.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

11 Years Ago

that was 55 years ago!
Firestone Feinberg

11 Years Ago

Then i'll hold the grudge for fifty-five years... of couse i'll have to hold it posthumously... I'.. read more

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