A Deep Mystery

Its a poem on the amazing facts occurring in our daily lives , just tried to put up my thoughts together .

How old is the universe ?

Not as old as it's today, 

It  started with the BIG BANG,

All the big books say.

Ice - creams are so cold,

smooth and sweet.

Anyways we love it, 

Although it shivers our teeth.

It's all because of receptors, 

Again the big books say,

After a research of so many days.

Bones remain after centuries a person dies, 

And is the ice - cream really made of ice ? 

I referred the books of Science and History,

But I find these questions a big mystery.

Author's Note

Hey Guys , I am back , with my first very own poem.Please inform about typos mistake if any.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Those book are on the shelves, ready to answer questions we've not thought of yet... keep looking!

Sweet post.

[SSAgnihotri]

Thank you so very very much. Your reviews mean a lot to me.

[M]

At first, I thought that there was a big jump between the big bang to
ice cream. but, at the end, it all came together.
I like this.

continue writing more poems!!

[SSAgnihotri]

Tysm friend. :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

This made me smile, there are so many things in our surroundings we never care
an interesting work to read, nice job

[SSAgnihotri]

My first try on poems this is.
Thanks sir :)

SSA

[Pushkar Prabhat]

these indeed are deep mysteries for us to forever wonder......
very well written.....
i liked it!!!
:)

[SSAgnihotri]

Thanks friend , great pleasure you liked it . Hope you even review my Story - Life of Friends ( My first creation and still in search of better reviews ) , SSA.

[sakshi arora]

That's such a candy floss read. Really enjoyed it :).

[SSAgnihotri]

Thanks !!!