A Smile ....

You cannot regret that this power can do anything :)

The street light blinked on , and I could see my shadow clearly now.Depressed and feeling alone , I was walking down the street to spend one more boring night again. " No ! No promotion this time , he works better than you " a voice moved into my ears . It felt that I would cry if I heard any more taunts.The people walking past me gave a weird look seeing my awful expressions when suddenly a beggar screamed , " Oh ! Rich one ! " . Irritated I barked on him " I don't have a single penny , get aside." The old buddy stood and put his hand on my shoulder gave me a big smile . I felt astonished but suddenly the wrinkles on my forehead vanished . It was such an energy that boosted me up again. I felt like a bird flying in the wide sky . A cool breeze swept and the moon even seemed giving me a confident smile.I knew the secret now , thanks to the old beggar.It was the smile that taught me the lesson of the life.Now from every time my boss scolded me again , or I was frustrated seeing the long bills , I passed my boss , or the courier boy , a CONFIDENT SMILE saying " Buddy , better luck next time ! :)

Author's Note

Its a request to all readers to give their reviews honestly to improve me , so that I give all you a better story next time ! Awaited for your reviews . SSA

Reviews

[jfdkslafnas]

I liked this, a good idea and storyline. My only suggestion would be to work on your punctuation and formatting. I think it would take out the bit of confusion I experienced while reading.
First tip, when using a comma, just one space after it.
Ex. When the dog ate the bone, he scampered off with his friends, Marvin and Clide.

Second and final tip, make a space before you put a quote/conversation.

Depressed and feeling alone, I was walking down the street spend one more boring night again.

"No! No promotion this time, he works better than you," a voice moved into my ears.

Well that's all. You by no means have to listen to any of that. It really liked this piece!

[SSAgnihotri]

Thanks buddy , for I was looking for such reviews , SSA .

[jfdkslafnas]

Your welcome. I was a a bit nervous when posting this, thought it would be too critical.

[SSAgnihotri]

Not critical at all , these are the points I want to be noted on to be a good writer . Once I am polished , would shine like a star . :) All because of such reviews .

[Aya]

Just my opinion, nice story and I liked it. Sometimes really all you need is a smile to feel better, and if to compare that beggar's day and the "rich"... Sure promotion is not everything and still you can always try another time :)

[SSAgnihotri]

Thank you so much !!!! :)

[Bluefire]

Neds some work with the little things, but it's very good.
I like this story a lot!

[SSAgnihotri]

Thanks Bluefire , I would work more and more on my writing , SSA .

[Bluefire]

No problem, never give up!