True.

True.

A Poem by Poe Met Emily

Please promise that things won't be broken
That you won't waste my time
Into more bad memories.
Stay as my Forever.
The only real love that lasts.
I need you so close I can't breathe
A sweet sound when you speak.
I'll be my best for you alone.
And in the end,
Your heart is my one, True Home.

© 2014 Poe Met Emily


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Poe Met Emily
05.07.2014

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It surprises me that there are no comments on this piece yet, it is amazing. Though I do have two suggestions. The last two words, "True home" would have a little more power and strength if they were on their own line. The other suggestion is not to capitalize every single line because that distracts the reader from the overall message and beauty of the piece. Otherwise, great job. beautifully penned. I love the way your voice comes out here

Posted 10 Years Ago



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