Seeing Reflections.

In the mirror, I glance to the eyes.

The ones I've seen over a thousand times

Dark listless circles line my view.

And all I can think of is you.

When my mind wants you to stay,

My heart wants to feel you all along the way;

Until I'm sick end on my knees.

Till you can see how breathless you make me.

Each day you come closer.

And all I want is for this to never be over.

Author's Note

05.07.2014

Reviews

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

This is a sweet piece. It definitely has heart to it. The only thing you might wanna fix is the fourth line from the end, end should be and I think. Other than that, amazing write. I love that it is short and simple yet it has power and flavor. Great job