New light

Darkness is difficult

To move through,

 to get past

Clouded mind's 

Do not hear as they should

The fog skews words and actions 

Making the mind relive what broke it

Finding a person who sees through the fog

and can pull you out  

showing you the light you didn't see in yourself

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

'Clouded mind's
Do not hear as they should'

How true! Sad that such minds stay in the same sullied state, life stagnant, hearts like stone, minds dark and lost in their colourless perception of Self! For sure, Life can be thicker than fog but - living it best one can is an ever-ready reach for light not only for self but others. This is such a fine and inspiring poem, sincere and gentle without even a speck of mindless babble, thank you, Kasey.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you for reading!

[Writergurl]

Finding a person who sees through the fog
and can pull you out
showing you the light you didn't see in yourself

love this part, love the end of this. awesome write here

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you for reading!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I like the ending. The whole poem was a pleasure to read. The beginning line caught me in, so true and wonderfully worded. tyfs

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. Glad you enjoyed

[poetgurl]

Love this and the ending, so truthful. I enjoy your style in this write

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you very much

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

That's something God & our life partner can certainly be able to do that for us...
New light comes from hope, prayers & faith in god, I feel.
I can relate to this you expressed it very nicely.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes as you express here, we need someone to be that fog light...to help us through the mist.
love the lines " Clouded minds/ do not hear as they should"--
j.

[Kasey Miriam]

As always thank you!