Brown Eyed Boy

Brown Eyed Boy

A Poem by Kasey Miriam

So there's this guy I've known most of my life
He's got the brightest brown eyes I've ever seen
And chocolate brown hair to match
Artist and funny, he's a bit of a jack of all trades
He's sweet and kind and has a gentle side, but still is a rough and tough man
There's so much to him that he doesn't see as wonderful as they are
23 years old and knighted in Germany
Spunky and loyal as can be.
I dare say he stole my heart years ago
Perhaps we missed our chance
If that's the case this man will walk his whole life with my heart and I wouldn't dream of getting it back
He's my rock 
And he's carried me through my hardest times 
He's my closest friend and the only one to put up with me for 16 years
I wouldn't trade him for the world 
He's my braver half and my protector 

© 2018 Kasey Miriam


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I can see him clearly from the way you described him! He has your heart and soul, that's for sure. Whether you are with him or not, no one will ever measure up to him. I have a small edit for you...last line, I think you mean, "will walk his whole life"....figured you would want to change that. Well written...from the heart. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

6 Years Ago

Thank you. I will edit soon



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Wonderful and hopeful words shared dear Kasey. Few people will excite our mind and our heart. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for love and friendship.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading as always!
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Kasey.
this is such a wonderful write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much
Nicely done; I knew a brown eyed man once, but his eyes were a lighter shade. So arresting; you couldn't look away! I will love him forever, although he was never really mine.
Good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading
awww, yes, there are those who steal our hearts and never give them back, even if we end up not being with them in the end.
our hearts are.
i relate...
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

6 Years Ago

Bittersweet really.
I can see him clearly from the way you described him! He has your heart and soul, that's for sure. Whether you are with him or not, no one will ever measure up to him. I have a small edit for you...last line, I think you mean, "will walk his whole life"....figured you would want to change that. Well written...from the heart. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

6 Years Ago

Thank you. I will edit soon
What a story. Missed chances are hard to get back. Remorse might set in. I see you like all the qualities in him.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

So, it won't go any further. I see now.
Kasey Miriam

6 Years Ago

There may still be a shot...life is pretty funny we just have to see is all
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Lol...................

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Added on September 29, 2018
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Curently a 29 year old wife and mother. My life revoles around my family and our children are the biggest blessing in life. I love to write Haiku and free verse poetry. more..

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