June at Grandpa's House

June at Grandpa's House

A Poem by Kasey Miriam

Open field of grass
Young siblings play in the summer.
Water gun and a bucket,
They splash and play.
Grandpa watches with his camera raised
Hours of fun at grandpa's house
He says "ready"
They know what that means
Time to pose for a picture.
I spun around to look at grandpa
Lost my balance,
Then my brother nudged me.
Tried to catch myself,
And plopped into the bucket.
With his hands on his hips,
And that smirk on his face.
I'd say my brother looked pretty proud.

Kasey Miriam 2015

© 2015 Kasey Miriam


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Kasey Miriam
http://people-are-amazing.com/kasey-miriam/

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One you'll always remember to I'll bet. Mischief and kids always go together don't they. :) Youth, Grandpa and memories are treasures never to be forgotten. I can see the sun shining and I can feel the warmth right on that field too.

Nice one Kasey.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

Thank you Relic. This is how I will remember my grandpa and I share the old days with him all the ti.. read more
Relic

9 Years Ago

I'm sorry to hear he had a stroke. I'm sure he's a good man. You'e welcome.
Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by and reading



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Really nice piece of work :) Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping to read
Great narrative. I really liked the details you bothered to put in your poem. The poem flows nicely, but the rhythm could be done a tad bit better. Overall a great write, I look forward reading more from you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

Thank you. I'll keep trying to fix the rhythm
THat sounds kind of neat. I'll bet you looked pretty good yourself.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading Marie. I surely looked like a happy seven year old
The old sibling rivalry. Sis & I did those things. Nice write!

Regards,
Al

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

Thank you Al. Glad you enjoyed the poem
Your writing is full of life and I always enjoy reading your work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

Thank you Amos for stopping by its nice to hear from you again
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

You're most welcome my dear...
So lovely and amazing those precious memories at grandpa's house. Picture perfect...:)......

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sami. Very nice of you to stop by
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. Any time...:)....
One you'll always remember to I'll bet. Mischief and kids always go together don't they. :) Youth, Grandpa and memories are treasures never to be forgotten. I can see the sun shining and I can feel the warmth right on that field too.

Nice one Kasey.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

Thank you Relic. This is how I will remember my grandpa and I share the old days with him all the ti.. read more
Relic

9 Years Ago

I'm sorry to hear he had a stroke. I'm sure he's a good man. You'e welcome.
Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by and reading
and grandpa got that picture?
this poem is a pleasant snapshot...
nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

He got the picture and it's one of my favorites.
That is funny and sweet dear...........
Time to pose.....

Time to pose for a picture.
I spun around to look at grandpa
Lost my balance,

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

When I was young I spent more time with my grandparents than anyone my grandpa and I had many good t.. read more

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Added on January 30, 2015
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Curently a 29 year old wife and mother. My life revoles around my family and our children are the biggest blessing in life. I love to write Haiku and free verse poetry. more..

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