Night

When day fades away

the moon and stars shine brightly

alas, morning light 

Kasey Miriam 2015

Reviews

[Syrmah]

I really like this. As I understand it, I feel the contempt towards the morning light almost ruining this twilight beauty. I wonder if a comma after "alas" could act as a caesura in order to solidify that idea, "alas, morning light". I think it would physically make the reader sigh along with it.

[Kasey Miriam]

That is a grand idea thank you very much for that and reading as well

[Sami Khalil]

A magical write that shines brightly with excellence...:)............

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you Sami for all your kindness

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................

[Stephen]

Ah! Once again ..you got my heart, Kasey by the beautiful words. You know what? I like you as a friend and of course as a great "Haiku's" writer. I found you very skilled at Haiku's although I don't know much how to write ..lol but Whenever I read your words, I just find one thing ..only one thing which blows me away to the world of cold winds is "Peace of the words" ..Yes, your words are packed with the boundaries of peace which express the depths of the meaning of your stuffs and which's further what I love the most about your stuffs. I admire your stuffs.

This haiku could be relate with the people's real lives because it's, I think, revealing the simplicity of the modern life with the effects of dark-nights. Lovely words! Keep on!

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you beyond words! I am always happy to see that people can dive to just how deep I try to get

[Stephen]

Your welcome! Yeah, you've got a way to let a reader feel your feelings ..real expressions of life through words and believe me, your just succeeded in doing winning the hearts of readers via words. Heyy..do you have any new projects you workin' on now a days?

[Kasey Miriam]

Not really anything new. Still posting new drafts of work from a while back and going to edit some stuff here soon

[Stephen]

Cool ..hey .. my apologies ..I just couldn't get some time to read your novel in a mean while but yeah, as I get some time, i'd read that complete ....you just keep posting your novels, i'll soon get you some reviews.

[Kasey Miriam]

Take your time! and thank you very much

[stars are far]

yeah, alas morning light.. well done :)

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you Stars

[jacob erin-cilberto]

simple yet shining haiku...

nicely done.

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you very much Jacob

[A. Amos]

nice way to describe beauty of night...great right

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you Amos

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[Saddam]

It is very nice and meaning full..... every night have a good reason that it passed, and over it side a bright sun is waiting... Nice

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you very much