Scuba Diving

Step into the water all suited up

Tank on my back  ready to go

Cool freshwater fills my suit 

Descend into the world below 

A calm place only few know 

Fly through liquid, light as a feather

Watch the fish in their own home

A safer feeling than warm blankets

Knowing under ther water is where I belong 

Kasey Miriam 2015

Reviews

[Stephen]

Perfect write! Your cool at Haiku's as well as at writing poems too, that's very impressive. I loved this poem..you've captured the moments of your life into the words making scuba diving more beautiful with the words.

Stay beautiful! :)

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you very much. The next thing I wanna try is a song but not sure how to go about it

[Marie]

This is lovely. I've never been scuba diving, and the idea always sounded frightening, but not the way you write it.

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you Marie for leaving a lovely comment

[Sami Khalil]

"A safer feeling than warm blankets

Knowing under ther water is where I belong"

I love this write. Finding our place of belonging and comfort. A mermaid indeed you could be...:).................

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you. I have always loved the water. Thank you again for taking the time to stop by

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:)............

[icelandicblue]

It sounds so beautiful and peaceful. You describe the mood and feelings beautifully in this.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you. That's also exactly what diving is for me.

[David Scott]

It is nice to find a place you know you belong. Especially when it is the magical underwater world...

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you very much

[A. Amos]

Wow! Kasey now this is amazing work, love your below verses. Sometimes I wonder you maybe be young but your soul is old:) you're very good my friend..


A safer feeling than warm blankets
Knowing under ther water is where I belong 

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you very much. I do believe I have an old soul, even as a child I had
"wisdom that was beyond my years" as my parent's friends would say

[A. Amos]

As I told you I'm your fan, I believe what you will create will remain in history. Proud of you and you're most welcome