Love

Emotions flutter

happiness strikes when eyes meet

heart like a feather.

Kasey Miriam 2015

Author's Note

Any thing that can make it better?

Reviews

[Stephen]

Hahaha. Am glad to read your stuffs once again. This is a very cool piece of your artistry. I don't think there's anything else that makes this Haiku more better reading cus it's already well penned n you have poured an every drop of love into the words marvelously. I liked this Haiku as same as I have loved your earlier ones you've dropped with the heart.

Keep up the good work!

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you so much. I'm always happy to see you're reading my work and leaving such kind comments

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good description of love. When love comes. We have no chance. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry for love.
Coyote

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you very much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

first line maybe "emotions flutter" that way "heart" would not be repeated...and you would still have your senryu of 5-7-5 syllables.

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you I like that idea.

[A. Amos]

Beautiful expressions about love, great work my friend...

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you my friend :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Excellent senryu, nothing beats that feeling when love sneaks up on you.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you for the lovely review

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Tis my pleasure.

[Sami Khalil]

Now that is love. Splendid...:).................

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................