Love

Emotions flutter

happiness strikes when eyes meet

heart like a feather.

Kasey Miriam 2015

Author's Note

Any thing that can make it better?

Reviews

[Stephen]

Hahaha. Am glad to read your stuffs once again. This is a very cool piece of your artistry. I don't think there's anything else that makes this Haiku more better reading cus it's already well penned n you have poured an every drop of love into the words marvelously. I liked this Haiku as same as I have loved your earlier ones you've dropped with the heart.

Keep up the good work!

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you so much. I'm always happy to see you're reading my work and leaving such kind comments

[Sami Khalil]

"Emotions flutter
happiness strikes when eyes meet
heart like a feather."

[ron]

This is so romantic.......

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you very much

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[stars are far]

YEAH..haha love is DUMB ..that is what I say ..
that was nice..

[Kasey Miriam]

Thanks for reading

[maria ( rose)]

Emotions flutter
happiness strikes when eyes meet

heart like a feather. Perfect! Love this poem Kasey. Great job!!:)
-maria rose

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you so much!

[Anonymous]

It's so sweet and simple :)

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you for stopping by enjoy the light and the dark of my work

[M.K. Jawdat]

So sweet this is really nice lovely piece

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you very much

[Marie]

No it shouldn't be changed. THere's a feeling of lightness in it...a happy poem.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you very much

[Zahra]

beauty in brevity. Very nicely done

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you very much