Spring Rains

Brings life to flowers

makes for a beautiful day 

the wonderful sound.

Kasey Miriam 2015

Reviews

[Stephen]

Lovely Write. The beauty of nature you've poured into the words. Rain always makes the life refresh...gives a new sound to feel the coldness of it and how the beauty of life makes an impact on all of us is you've magnificently expressed in a beautiful Haiku.

Keep up the beautiful work!

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you very much

[Sami Khalil]

"Brings life to flowers
makes for a beautiful day
the wonderful sound."

Utmost impact on your readers with brevity...Bravo.........

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you Sami always nice to hear from you

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very nicely done, a gray expression of what makes spring the best season. By the way if this is suppose to be a haiku you only have 6 syllables the second line. You could put "Makes for a beautiful day".

[Kasey Miriam]

Oh goodness thank you, that is how the line was s'posed to be, thank you for pointing that out.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome, I make those mistakes all the time myself.

[Relic]

Beautifully said. I love rain, whether it arrives in day or night Kasey. Relic. (Autumn)

[Kasey Miriam]

rain in the day creates rich color rain at night helps me sleep. Win win situation rain is. And it's bounus points are the fact i enjoy dancing barefoot in the rain.

[Relic]

Ahh, nice. I sit in the backyard with the sprinkler on feet. haha

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Sweet, simple and all together refreshing, well done, good read.

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you very much

[wordman]

food from on high gently spread from on high to water the roses in my garden so rare

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you for leaving your comment

[wordman]

you are welcome I just posted part two

[The Chosen Poet]

Ideal art, few words witholding such a positive meaning and depth. Lovely piece

Sean

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you very much Sean

[FJ]

So few words have so much meaning. If you close your eyes after reading "Spring Rains" you should hear the seedlings breaking through the soil - smell the morning rains as the sun warms up the day - and the sound of the robins and cardinals singing their love songs. In so few words so much comes to life!!! Great piece - I am going to read more of your poems.

[Kasey Miriam]

Your review describes exactly what I ment for the reader to feel! thank you for stopping by and leaving this lovely comment.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your words. Flowers make us know. There is beauty all around us for us to see. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you so much for your lovely words

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that wonderful sound is drenching us right now...as i imagine it is for you too in ohio...we are currently experiencing vicious thunderstorms and tornadoes...i drove home from teaching tonight and could scarcely see three feet in front of the car...

i suspect some really pretty spring flowers will come from this.

nicely done haiku.

[Kasey Miriam]

thank you, the little town i live in is just getting showers so far