A DAY WITH YOU

A DAY WITH YOU

A Poem by AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA
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DREAMING OF A DAY OUT WITH MY ANGEL

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A jar full of penny

A song to puff my ears  at any �-

A long drive;

A glass of 🍷 wine

Coupled with

Some chicken

At nine,

Gorgeous night

Along-there

Astrals dine

Blinking and  placing their crime;

Followed by..

A pleasant sunshine

Any birds to chime

 Remembrance of UR rhyme

And U;

Tight sniffing winds

In which

By time I rinse;

Ur attire

That put me in a  satire

Ur glamorous face

And that smile

Ah-mm Ah-mm

And U;

Sometimes

I hope for a day

A day out with U

Creating an emptiness

N

Making some happiness

To U.....😉 

© 2015 AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA


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Ah..mm Ah..mm - brilliant use of drama in poem! Liked👍

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cute. It's like a happy dream drifting along. I really enjoyed it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA

9 Years Ago

thanks dear.....

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Added on August 13, 2015
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Tags: #LOVE, #DREAM, #THOUGHTS, #TWILIGHT

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AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA
AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA

patiala, punjab, India



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just a bowl of imagination, where in my thoughts travel through the world of art may it be writings , poetry or sketches. seeker, learner, canon of love , gravity guy. more..

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