I'm fine.. but you might not be.

I'm fine.. but you might not be.

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Gave you a try. Gave you my all.

Take me as I am or not at all.

Childish? Sometimes.

Mean? Not really.

Able to break your arm? Any day!

Then there's you.

Lair? Yes.

Jerk?All the time.

Hates me? Yep.

My friends.

Can be trusted? Always.

Can cheer you up? Everyday!

Love me to Death? Always have always will.

Compare those things.

Witch is better?

I'll go with my friends while you stand there. Okay?

I'll say everything I wante to say. Okay?

Your not listening. I can tell your not.

Go act stupid to someone else.

While I stay here.

 

© 2010


Author's Note

<The.Show>
My life my story dont have something nice to say dont say anything at all.

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"If you don’t have something nice to say don’t say anything at all."-- that's from bambi. I love that movie

Posted 14 Years Ago



1st I agree with you Author’s note! If you don’t have something nice to say don’t say anything at all.
Love the way you take you life into your own hands, knowing that true friends will always no matter what be there for you. You give all you have and that is more than enough; if "he" didn’t appreciate you it's really his loss isn't it! I love the last stanza as you finish with power

"Your not listening. I can tell your not.
Go act stupid to someone else.
While I stay here.
Thoroughly enjoyable write! ~ Judi :-)


Posted 14 Years Ago



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