Drawing In the Park

Brianna is a 16 year old girl that lives in Roxbury, NJ. She looked around the Spring day weather. All of the sudden this boy with beautiful blue eyes. She couldn't help but stare. He had light brown hair with dark brown low lights he has a skater hair. She drew him and later as the day went on she left. He stoped her as he said " Uh, Hey my name is Drew." His soft vocie said.

   "I'm Brianna." Drew thought to himself " Her vocie is light. It's cute"  Drew pulled out a pen and wote his number on her hand. Brianna looked up at him waved bye and pulled out her phone. She texted it right away. The is how it went.

 

Brianna:Hey It's Brianna

Drew:Ohh Hey

Brianna:how are you?

Drew: I was a little sad that you left but I'm ok now

Brianna: Really?

Drew: Yeah..

Brianna: I saw you in the park and I know this sounds weird but I stared at you.

Drew: Aww thats cute

Brianna: Yeah you are

Drew: What did you just say I'm cute?

Brianna: Yeah sorry you prob have a girlfriend

Drew: Nope

Brianna: Ohh

Drew: But there is someone I like

Brianna: Then I shouldn't but in

Drew: It's you silly!

Brianna:Oh lol

Drew: Do you wanna meet back at the park tomorrow at noon?

Brianna: Sure :)

Drew: cool well I gtg sorry:(

Brianna: Sweet Dreams :)

Drew: Yeah you too ( maybe I'll have one About you)

Brianna: Haha.. Night

Drew:I love you

Brianna:What?

Drew:Nothing... Bye

Brianna:Bye

That night Drew couldn't fall asleep. He just wrote on his walls with sharpie. Things like " Brianna Is The Girl Of My Dreams " and hearts all over.

Reviews

[Ardeth Lane]

It moved pretty fast. A little bit more detail, and...I dunno time? Oh, and right in the beginnign voice is spelt wrong. :) Just helpin'!