Danielle's Haiku

Exploring the form of Haiku...

 

Rushing, gushing falls

Flowing away from the source

The cycle repeats

 

And I wonder why

And I wonder how it works

Compare my life blood

 

There is no answer

Just rain, river, ocean, rain

And I write with awe

 

Comprehend science

Existentialism too

I have to relate

 

Too many clichés

Available to abuse

So I write haiku

Author's Note

5-7-5

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

I have to say, I'm not usually moved by Haiku (maybe because of the limitations and I've never been a fan of limitations), but your words flow so freely they rise above the constrictions of form! Your writing always has a way of transcending the restictive use of words to convey emotion and light. If I was Canadian I would say "I love it EH!!!"

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Interesting serial haiku! each one could stand alone many with a profound message.

[emmajoy]

I so appreciate and admire this... the way you've used haiku and formed more, yet kept it all so simple - no cliches in sight.

[Arthur Henn]

Excellent, I have written lots of haiku and never thought about compiling them into a poem like this. What a great Idea. Thank you for sharing.

Art

[Rambling Prose]

This is another well written piece. The all inspiring wonders of nature and the unwillingness to destroy it with a handful of clich�s.

Another brilliant write...