Loss Clock

exlporing grief through free form

>the sun refuses to rise and fall according to my pain

Reviews

[Lalli]

sorry to hear about the loss.... i actualyl read this poem twice. I waned to make sure absorbed everything, and i'm glad i did... it was the lines I am at a loss, and the revealing of your brother.. that made me think, maybe i should go back and read the begginning now that i know that. I like how it captivated me, then made me want to understand more. very emotional piece your heart is exposed. thank you for sharing

much love n respect

-Lalli

[Talkless]

A speechless justies to poetry i most say

[Derek Nall]

Beautiful and tragic...made my heart frown but a really really great poem, felt it for sure!

[MonsterWriter]

I am sorry to hear for your loss I know the feeling but it was so beautiful as well.

[DaniElle LaPointe]

Written in 2008. Last adjustment for sharing content caused this to copyright 2013.

[Huggy Bear]

This is a very beautiful piece:) Great work:)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

The traumatic circumstances surrounding this specific event in your life, has understandably, been reflected in the poetic structure you choose to describe your intense, deep, and profound sorrow.

It has been written, grief has five discrete stages; denial, anger, bargaining, depression and acceptance: all of which manifest themselves at differing times after the event.

The most important thing is sharing your feelings with others who are supportive and understanding.

You have my prayers!

Phill(ozofee)

[Tina Kline]

This is a very painful and very moving poem. I think you wrote it
well and the pain of the memory comes across strongly. Sad.

Tina

[Antonio Valentino]

Oh my, I can only imagine what you're going through dear poet.
It's nice that you have this creative outlet to help in some small way deal with what you're going through.
And in doing so, through the love of your brother, you help others deal with their own struggles.

So courageous, and meaningful that you can share your feelings with us.

Dear blessings to you and yours.
Rich

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You've expressed your sorrow in a beautiful poetic way. Free form or not, poetry is poetry and this is heartfelt and beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

[emmajoy]

Firstly, this is a beautifully written and shaped poem.

Secondly, it expresses a tragedy and a grief that can't fail to touch anyone reading your poem. I can't write any more. Hugging you.