Sitam

Sometimes it's more traumatic for one that the person whom you made so feel special yesterday, the same makes you feel so unwanted today.

Muddaton se chaha tha tujhe, sach hai badi minnaton se paya tha,

zahen me jo aaya mere, yakeenan har wo tareeka aajmaya tha..

 

 

Par tujhe khone ke khauf me aie azeez, galib har pal ghabraya tha,

Har imtihaan se guzarne ko tha raazi, ke ye dil tera hi sarmaaya tha..

 

 

Muhabbat ki aatish se tha ye sama roshan, jiska shola tune bhadkaya tha,

Aakhri lamho me ikttijaa thi teri, par khuda ne rahem hi kab mujhpe barsaya tha..

 

 

Aasra ik tera hi tha hamko O zalim, kusoor itna tha ke tujhse dil lagaya tha,

Be-taseer tha kya ye ishq hamara, aab-e-chashm ka ghoot tune hame pilaya tha..

 

 

Ghayal the teri ham zafa se magar, muhabbat ke takht par hamne tujhe bithaya tha,

Naagawaar hum tumhe kyu hue kya khabar, toota wo khwaabo ka mela jo hamnne sang sajaya the..

 

 

Tukde hokar bikhra ye dil aakhir me, sitam hi tumne hampar aisa dhaaya tha,

Ye fariyad tere kaano me goonji jo dheerey se, koi aur nahi hamnashin wo mera hi saaya tha..!!

Reviews

[heartspeaks]

Are you kidding? Is This really your work...Looks like Mirza Galib's poetry...You surely are a Urdu Fan... I am just spell bound ...

Ab kya tareef karun?
Jo khud zarra zarra tareef ho
ab uski kya tareef karun

Your poems are amazing...This was a wonderful poetry...Keep it up

[Abhishek Asthana]

Oh my god !! i can't take it brother... i am a very common writer but yes i am a big fan of urdu... extremely thanks for your beautiful words... :)

[Sudeep Mishra]

Nyc one.
Keep going.
Cheers and peace out.

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thanks for your kind words of and visit sudeep

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ah.....masha Allah....itni khoobsurti hai hr lafz mein ki yeh shayari attracted me towards it.....i love this, i love this, i love this reallly!!!!!

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thats an honor for me if you have found this write attractive... bht bht shukriya... Thanks for the encouraging review wajiha

[Priyanshi]

last lines are so amazing ...kya bolu mein .....badi achi likhto ho aap...likhte raho aur hum yuhi padte rahenge

[Abhishek Asthana]

I have noticed quite a few times that u always like my last lines... pehle ki lines me h kuch jaan daalni padegi i guess... hahaha... Well, i pay more attention towards the ending because end part is the soul of the whole content i believe... Thank you much for reviewing priyanshi... jabtak hum likhte rahe aap yuhi padti raho :)

[Priyanshi]

aise koi baat nahi hai ...its just a fact ki last lines zyada pasand aati hai ,hahaha....vaise, puri poem hi achi hoti hai ...my pleasure reading your poems.

[Abhishek Asthana]

I know i was just kidding... if you would not have liked the first half then how would you have reached the last part... you have been so encouraging... really thanks for that :)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, abhishek.

[Najam Us Saher]

I have no words to say how deep and heart touching this is. Every word has come from depth of your heart and shows your immense love.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks a lot najam... appreciation means alot and it initiates me to write more... and i really admire my friends who like my hindi pieces as well because i love writing hindi-urdu poems too.

[Najam Us Saher]

Trust me I who speak urdu cannot write such. You are most welcome.

[Abhishek Asthana]

not like that, in fact you write so well hindi-urdu poem,,, i have read some of your poems few weeks ago,,, and my love for urdu language is endless... without its contribution poetry nowhere exist !!

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right urdu poetry sounds so deep and thoughtful.

[Surya]

The pain rite...
Firstly, I donno much hindi and that too not in pure words...But I tried google, flow of sentences..all made me to write more in Hindi wit proper words, So thank you.....And I enjoyed every bit of it....:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks so much for reading it surya,,, yes it is an emotional write...that too i know u do not know much hindi but you always want to create pieces in hindi thats a thing i like the most... and if you want that i will make you understand the meaning of entire poem... whether it is hindi or urdu...i am glad you enjoyed this one...

[Surya]

I understood it after much efforts... many Thanks to you, but I Believe finding treasure on own, makes me much happy than any...:)