Sitam

Sometimes it's more traumatic for one that the person whom you made so feel special yesterday, the same makes you feel so unwanted today.

Muddaton se chaha tha tujhe, sach hai badi minnaton se paya tha,

zahen me jo aaya mere, yakeenan har wo tareeka aajmaya tha..

 

 

Par tujhe khone ke khauf me aie azeez, galib har pal ghabraya tha,

Har imtihaan se guzarne ko tha raazi, ke ye dil tera hi sarmaaya tha..

 

 

Muhabbat ki aatish se tha ye sama roshan, jiska shola tune bhadkaya tha,

Aakhri lamho me ikttijaa thi teri, par khuda ne rahem hi kab mujhpe barsaya tha..

 

 

Aasra ik tera hi tha hamko O zalim, kusoor itna tha ke tujhse dil lagaya tha,

Be-taseer tha kya ye ishq hamara, aab-e-chashm ka ghoot tune hame pilaya tha..

 

 

Ghayal the teri ham zafa se magar, muhabbat ke takht par hamne tujhe bithaya tha,

Naagawaar hum tumhe kyu hue kya khabar, toota wo khwaabo ka mela jo hamnne sang sajaya the..

 

 

Tukde hokar bikhra ye dil aakhir me, sitam hi tumne hampar aisa dhaaya tha,

Ye fariyad tere kaano me goonji jo dheerey se, koi aur nahi hamnashin wo mera hi saaya tha..!!

Reviews

[heartspeaks]

Are you kidding? Is This really your work...Looks like Mirza Galib's poetry...You surely are a Urdu Fan... I am just spell bound ...

Ab kya tareef karun?
Jo khud zarra zarra tareef ho
ab uski kya tareef karun

Your poems are amazing...This was a wonderful poetry...Keep it up

[Abhishek Asthana]

Oh my god !! i can't take it brother... i am a very common writer but yes i am a big fan of urdu... extremely thanks for your beautiful words... :)

[Wild Rose]

Sorry I do not understand this language

[Abhishek Asthana]

Soon i will bring the English translation... Till the time you can read my poems written in english

[Swetha]

Wow, amazing. Superb poetry. Feelings come alive with your poetry...

[Zoya]

Wahh...kya baat hai nawab sahab! Though my urdu isn't that strong...I could still feel the emotions as i read this line by line...urdu the matlab ki khoobsurti hai...aapke lafzon ne iski khoobsurti ko aur bhi badha diya. Behtareen...

[Ayush Mishra]

Mindblowing Urdu words...loved it ...

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks a lot buddy... m glad u loved it

[Divyani]

Apki nasheed ko dekh kr socha to bhot pr likha km mainee, ki apki tareef ke kabil mere alfaaz kha.... Mashallah kya khoob likha h apne

[Abhishek Asthana]

Hahaha...biggest compliment and that too in style...quite impressed...thanks a ton Divyani :)

[pia]

Again not very good with urdu
Or hindi in your case
But what ever i managed to read.
Wonderfully written
I love it

[Abhishek Asthana]

Oh,, i thought you might be very good at urdu... sorry if it troubled you... well i love this language very much though none of my friends or family members do not speak urdu and i always love to write urdu poems... thank you so much for reading

[pia]

I can speak ittt !! Very well but i have a tough time reading it
I spent 15 years studying in school in English. So it does impact my skills
Urdu is a beautiful language indeed

[Abhishek Asthana]

exactly... and i believe the contribution of urdu in poetry is unmatchable

[Anjali]

Lovely! You used Urdu very well.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks a lot anjali... glad u liked it... yes, i have deep love 4 urdu :)

[Sofia]

Beautiful!! Itni acchi Urdu kaise aati hai aapko?? Its really really wonderful☺......truly..i loved it..its just so beautiful 😃 thnx for sharing

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thank you so much sofia for your kind words... hahaha... I guess being lucknow citizen thodi urdu to aa hi jati h... so no special efforts...and some way or the others urdu has got a significant role in poetry... till the time i keep on writing....you just keep enjoying... I will feel honored

[Sofia]

You're welcome 😃 yeah, keep writing and I'll keep reviewing 😃...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

would like to see you post these poems with two versions...including a translation.

j.

[Abhishek Asthana]

sure sir, i will keep in mind...as few of my writer friends want it to be translated in both version... I am happy you shown interest in this... Thanks alot for your visit sir :)