Hug your mom

Sometimes all you need a tight hug from your mother and surely all your stress will melt away.

It's been aforecited earlier many times,

Mother is the perplexing discovery of the deity.

This is a kind of unwordly dilemma of emotions,

Which cannot be ameliorated through any treaty.

 

 

There is nothing beyond her grasp,

What does infant hurriedly require.

The way she converses with a kid,

It's a marvellous art which none of us acquire.

 

 

During childhood days mom acts like mentor,

Then afterwards she turns into counsellor.

Periodically she promotes herself into different characters,

Her own versatility is really as spectacular.

 

 

She enshrouds lapse made by the children,

And can willingly confront with any hindrance.

In sake of her kids, she resolves any conflict,

She overcomes any battle with her brilliance.

 

 

Though she knows, babies have grown up into adults,

Then too she wants to pamper and feed them by spoon,

Heartily she is an epitome of sacrifices,

For child having mother itself is a priceless boon.

Author's Note

i just wanted to share this one on the occasion of mother's day but that day i was too busy in missing my mom... her love for me is like nothing else in the world... miss you a lot mom

Reviews

[Aradhana]

A great poem showing what a mother does for her children. How much ever we try to describe her love, dedication,care and sacrifice for us we won't be ale to coz it's beyond words. Those feelings we get from her, that security and all is just beyond the reach of words. If we are something today then its probably due to the values our mothers inculcated in us....Indeed ur mum will be glad to hear this

[Abhishek Asthana]

She left me so early, but her soul must have been delighted to see a very small tribute towards her... I really miss her... Thanks for your kind words !!

[Aradhana]

kehte h ki agar duaa dil se nikli h toh vo pohoch hi jaati h.... well everyone has to go but their love and affection remains with us forever...she may be blessing u from the heavens above... :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

Bus isi soch aur umeed ke saath insaan apni kam ya lambi zindagi jee jata hai... so totally agreed... All i have to say is < Maa ka hona bohot zaruri hota hai >...

[Aradhana]

sahi baat h maa hoti h toh ek security rehti h duniya uske daman s bohot sundar lagti but jab vo jati h toh aisa lagta h duniya me ab kuch bacha hi nhi

[Abhishek Asthana]

Exactly, so jis bacche ke liye kuch bacha na ho use sab bacha-kucha sa hi lagta ha puri duniya me.... Since childhood i have been going through this pain..!

[Aradhana]

But since u have cm this far this is just due to her love and her care only which is in the form of blessings from go☺️☺️

[Abhishek Asthana]

Undoubtedly

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is soo heart touching...i love the last stanzas alot..and i love the poem as well...keep it up abhi!

[Abhishek Asthana]

Tears were flowing from my eyes when i was writing it down... it was just an attempt to make people understand that how they are blessed to have mother in their lives...thank you so much wajiha

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure dear!

[Mr.Writer]

Very sweet and kind of you to write a poem on mothers! :)
I really liked the feeling and message it gave that being with your mother and sharing your feelings with her can make you feel better, also to appreciate her everyday :)
Keep it up!

[Abhishek Asthana]

actually the one who has not got the prominent resources in life can better understand the true worth of it...same is with me
thanks a lot for reading :)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very heart touching....I can understand the emotions behind this.....beautifully written.

[Abhishek Asthana]

yes, i know it can be deeply understood by you...in fact mother is greatest treasure... thanks for reading

[Najam Us Saher]

Truly said....you're welcome.

[Raj Sahu]

I particularly like these parts of the poem:
'The way she converses with a kid,
It's a marvellous art which none of us acquire.'
'She enshrouds lapse made by the children,
And can willingly confront with any hindrance.
In sake of her kids, she resolves any conflict,
She overcomes any battle with her brilliance.


Though she knows, babies have grown up into adults,
Then too she wants to pamper and feed them by spoon,
Heartily she is an epitome of sacrifices,
For child having mother itself is a priceless boon.'

This is an amazing piece of work. It reveals the love of a mother towards her child. The love is very well depicted. 😊😊

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks buddy, there is nothing like the love between the mother and a child.