Hug your mom

Sometimes all you need a tight hug from your mother and surely all your stress will melt away.

It's been aforecited earlier many times,

Mother is the perplexing discovery of the deity.

This is a kind of unwordly dilemma of emotions,

Which cannot be ameliorated through any treaty.

 

 

There is nothing beyond her grasp,

What does infant hurriedly require.

The way she converses with a kid,

It's a marvellous art which none of us acquire.

 

 

During childhood days mom acts like mentor,

Then afterwards she turns into counsellor.

Periodically she promotes herself into different characters,

Her own versatility is really as spectacular.

 

 

She enshrouds lapse made by the children,

And can willingly confront with any hindrance.

In sake of her kids, she resolves any conflict,

She overcomes any battle with her brilliance.

 

 

Though she knows, babies have grown up into adults,

Then too she wants to pamper and feed them by spoon,

Heartily she is an epitome of sacrifices,

For child having mother itself is a priceless boon.

Author's Note

i just wanted to share this one on the occasion of mother's day but that day i was too busy in missing my mom... her love for me is like nothing else in the world... miss you a lot mom

Reviews

[Aradhana]

A great poem showing what a mother does for her children. How much ever we try to describe her love, dedication,care and sacrifice for us we won't be ale to coz it's beyond words. Those feelings we get from her, that security and all is just beyond the reach of words. If we are something today then its probably due to the values our mothers inculcated in us....Indeed ur mum will be glad to hear this

[Abhishek Asthana]

She left me so early, but her soul must have been delighted to see a very small tribute towards her... I really miss her... Thanks for your kind words !!

[Aradhana]

kehte h ki agar duaa dil se nikli h toh vo pohoch hi jaati h.... well everyone has to go but their love and affection remains with us forever...she may be blessing u from the heavens above... :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

Bus isi soch aur umeed ke saath insaan apni kam ya lambi zindagi jee jata hai... so totally agreed... All i have to say is < Maa ka hona bohot zaruri hota hai >...

[Aradhana]

sahi baat h maa hoti h toh ek security rehti h duniya uske daman s bohot sundar lagti but jab vo jati h toh aisa lagta h duniya me ab kuch bacha hi nhi

[Abhishek Asthana]

Exactly, so jis bacche ke liye kuch bacha na ho use sab bacha-kucha sa hi lagta ha puri duniya me.... Since childhood i have been going through this pain..!

[Aradhana]

But since u have cm this far this is just due to her love and her care only which is in the form of blessings from go☺️☺️

[Abhishek Asthana]

Undoubtedly

[pragya gaur]

This is the perfect one Abhishek Ji...I too wrote one one my mom.....on mother's day...please have a look....I m sure he will like it

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks so much pragya ji... i am glad you liked it... definitely i will read that motherly write... thanks a lot for reading

[andrew mitchell]

Yes hug your Mum she's the only one you got and brought you here and loved you to pieces like mums do!

[Abhishek Asthana]

exactly,,, i do agree with you... thank you so much for reading and reviewing... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. A mother's love is forever. I liked the control poem. When you honor your mother. You honor yourself. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Abhishek Asthana]

many thanks to you for your kind words,, m glad u liked it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[apennylate]

The unique blend of words make this simply metered rhyme scheme a complex beat of emotion... While not all mothers are like the one described in this poem... Your mother seems a gem, and a brilliant support... You carefully and wonderfully portrayed that here, and I applaud that... Lovingly penned...

[Abhishek Asthana]

yes, she was the best but unfortunately her presence with me did not last for so long... i really miss her...thanks a lot for your kind words sir

[apennylate]

I am sorry, at least you immortalize her here... You are so very welcome...

[M]

Wow this was beautifully written. I'm amazed at how you wrote this poem so eloquently. You did an amazing job at projecting a mother's love into words.

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thanks for your kind words... I never want to leave any opportunity to show my gratitude towards moms...Thanks so much for reading :)

[L.C. Jarrette]

i'm a fan...i'll be sure to follow you.
:D

[Mamta Sonowal]

Wow! Nothing to say just amazing. You incredibly tell ur feelings towards mother through this poem... Amazing work...

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thanks so much Miss sonowal... sorry i cannot address you by your first name because thats my mother's name as well... do not mind !!

[Mamta Sonowal]

Ur most welc'me... Ooh nic ur mother's nme is also Mamta. That's nic. Anywayz I didn't mind u didn't call me by my first name coz I lyk tht people call me by my sur name...

[Joey Nizz]

This is beautiful!
The mother is everything, she is the closest thing to us no matter what, and she is the only one that will love us the most.

Well wrote, really beautiful.

[Abhishek Asthana]

excatly she is the only one,,, thanks a for reading joey, i am glad you liked it :)

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome man, Im glad that I have read this. ^^

[jayanth]

I miss my mom , i think this made you win. cheers to you writing.

[Abhishek Asthana]

i just wish that she would have been enjoying my victory here... thank you so much for your kind visit jayanth

[wordman]

the best friend you`ll ever have

[Abhishek Asthana]

exactly, totally agreed... thank a lot for reading :)

[Tony Jordan]

They bring us into the world and we owe them our lives but then they love us and ask nothing in return.
Well penned A.A.

[Abhishek Asthana]

true and any other affection is incapable of being matched by this unconditional love.. thanks you for reading