Sanjeedgi

When someone you love deeply treats you as if you were nothing, its nearly impossible not to feel you truly are nothing.

Farmaaya jis pal usne, beshak badi aasaani se,

Ke kuch b nhi rha baaki abse hamare darmiyan...

 

Bataye kya tumko aakhir, kya guzri thi tute dil par,

Barso k bune ye khwaab apne, ik thokar me jo hue dhuaan...

 

Jisko rab ka rutba de baithe the hum pehli fursat me,

Usne hi chcheeni kadmo se zameen aur sar se aasmaan...

 

Bakhoobi hum khare utre ulfat ke sab paimaano par,

Aadhi raah me wo chchod gy, jinke waaste chchoda ye jahaan...

 

Khudgarzi ab aisi bhi kya jo bhule tum har daastan,

Chaman apna roshan kr lia, yun jalakar mera aashiyaan...

 

Sanjeedgi gar tum muhabbat ki samajh paate meri,

To peechey nhi hat te kadam, na todte mera gumaan...

 

Tasveer utaari hardum jiski dil par, ranj isi ka h,

Betakalluf ho us shakhs ne mitaaye mere hi nishaan...

 

Hume zindagi to ab apnaane se rahi par gam nahi,

Intezaar bus us lamhe ka hai kab maut ho jaaye meharbaan...   

Reviews

[Lavi]

very nice lines! i m impressed

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank u so much 4 reading... m glad u liked it

[Najam Us Saher]

Barso k bune ye khwab apne ik thokar me hue dhuaan. This is my most favourite line. Very heart touching. It almost brought tears in my eyes.

[Abhishek Asthana]

and mine is "To peechey nhi hat te kadam, na todte mera gumaan"... thank you so much if you found it so heart touching... :)

[Najam Us Saher]

I really did. You're welcome :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

apke zarre zarre ki takalluf ka abh andaza hua hai mujhe...khuda kare khushiyaan rehmat bankr ho ap pe....this was wonderful....great write!

[Abhishek Asthana]

AMEN, thanks for your kind words... appreciation means a lot.. :)

[Surya]

That's beautiful, each and every line got a fell within, and last lines I liked a lot....:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much surya.. m glad u liked it !