Sanjeedgi

When someone you love deeply treats you as if you were nothing, its nearly impossible not to feel you truly are nothing.

Farmaaya jis pal usne, beshak badi aasaani se,

Ke kuch b nhi rha baaki abse hamare darmiyan...

 

Bataye kya tumko aakhir, kya guzri thi tute dil par,

Barso k bune ye khwaab apne, ik thokar me jo hue dhuaan...

 

Jisko rab ka rutba de baithe the hum pehli fursat me,

Usne hi chcheeni kadmo se zameen aur sar se aasmaan...

 

Bakhoobi hum khare utre ulfat ke sab paimaano par,

Aadhi raah me wo chchod gy, jinke waaste chchoda ye jahaan...

 

Khudgarzi ab aisi bhi kya jo bhule tum har daastan,

Chaman apna roshan kr lia, yun jalakar mera aashiyaan...

 

Sanjeedgi gar tum muhabbat ki samajh paate meri,

To peechey nhi hat te kadam, na todte mera gumaan...

 

Tasveer utaari hardum jiski dil par, ranj isi ka h,

Betakalluf ho us shakhs ne mitaaye mere hi nishaan...

 

Hume zindagi to ab apnaane se rahi par gam nahi,

Intezaar bus us lamhe ka hai kab maut ho jaaye meharbaan...   

Reviews

[Anjali]

Such a great poem, it's so good, I loved it so much!

[Swetha]

Another great piece of work.Enjoyed

[brinda]

Beautiful words.Even more beautiful feelings.I especially liked the fact that you honestly expressed your feelings,not caring if you came across as a weak person who finds it difficult to move on.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much brinda... this writer is so negative, it is harder to identify the feeling of love loss and betrayal behind it... really appreciate your words :)

[Sofia]

A touching nd emotional write..it was so beautifully written... wonderful.. I loved it..

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks a lot,, yes it is an emotional write,, i am glad you liked it

[Sofia]

You're welcome

[Pravir]

Bhut hi khubsurat . . . dil ko chho lene waali lines . . . . great work

[Abhishek Asthana]

i am glad you like it,,, bht bht shukriya :)

[Ayush Mishra]

very emotion and sad stuff ...bt beautifully written and expressed..

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much buddy

[Farhan Shaikh]

You use these hindi so perfectly to make it into a poem ..that's not everyone's cup of tea

[Abhishek Asthana]

i love to write in both the languages,,, and assistance of urdu has been admirable everytime...

[Divyani]

As usual ur poems are impressive. Very nice dear. Ur poems takes me in another world. Superb

[Abhishek Asthana]

That's the huge compliment for me... Thanks a lot for reading... appreciation means a lot !!

[Priyanshi]

Lovely poem expressing your feelings.....and beautifully penned it.

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thank you so much priyanshi :)

[Priyanshi]

pleasure is mine.