Retrograde

truly said, that its hard to forget who gives you so much to remember

Ghoorte ab kya ho khaamosh in tasveeron ko tum,

Kahin bol na padu mai, ektak yu tere dekhne se.

 

 

 

Sabak ishq ka izzat se le chuke hai yaar kai baar ab to,

Hota na kuch haasil hai such hai angaaron pe dil sekne se.

 

 

 

Khaayi hi nahi to todoge kya kasme wafaaye ishq ki,

Choor choor sa ho gaya hai dil ye khilona tere fekne se.

 

 

 

Kisko karoge ab fanaa, ke ab dard-e-muhabbat jhelo tum,

sach jhooth me tabdeel nahi hota, sajda krne ya maatha tekne se.

Reviews

[Swetha]

You are true to the place you come from. You are indeed a great poet...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

again, would like the English version included, this leaves so many of us out, when we cannot read the poem at all.

[Abhishek Asthana]

yaa sure sir,

now, why are you keep on staring at these silent photos
i will be bound to speak if you will carry on doing this...

now, i have been very much aware about the consequences of love
if you put your heart on fire then too it will be no use...

if you have not made any promises then how you are gonna break it.
its just like you threw my heart away,considering it as toy, hurts a lot.

since i am not there, so whom are you going to exploit,
truth of the matter cannot be transformed in lies, no matters how much you pray or visit holy places

[Priyanshi]

You write so well in hindi, though English poems are also excellent, but i love reading hindi poems more.
This poem shows you as a true great poet, keep it up, Abhishek.

[Abhishek Asthana]

frankly speaking i never think of myself as a great poet... i just love to write some pieces in my native language as well and urdu language always enhances the presentation ... thank you so much if you finds them worth reading

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wonderfully written.. i like it!

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you wajiha for reading it

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Well Done....great effort

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much sanskrity

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Welcome....

[Ayush Mishra]

good work...keep writing..

[Abhishek Asthana]

yups sure buddy, i will.. thanks

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very true and wonderful..
Amazing to read.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much farhan :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very true and thoughtful lines. I liked it a lot.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much for reading... i am glad you liked this one...!! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[horizon]

BEAUTIFUL....i can understand each word and can connect myself..we can only love someone but they doesn't gives us the promise to love you back the whole life as you did

[Abhishek Asthana]

they may feel regret then so... in fact they have lost the one who used to love them alot... ultimately their misfortune... thank a lot for reading !!

[horizon]

you do not need to say thanks for every review your work is worth reading😀😀

[Abhishek Asthana]

it was not just for reading, moreover reviews induce me from inside and helps me to write down my perception in more better way... :)

[horizon]

okk then I should say your welcome 👍

[Surya]

Last lines are true and whole poem of course...it's hard to forget those who give us much...:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

exactly.. but sometimes one person gets late to realize it... i am glad you liked it