Migration

Most people can find someone in their own family who had experienced a migration of some kind, knowing the sense of dislocation, longing and fortitude.

The isolation from vernacular has palpably led to the worries,

Stray your valiant mind into the world of memories.

 

 

The contemplation of past events, it will bring tranquility,

Be sturdy from inside, accept this transfiguration with equanimity.

 

 

Reviving erstwhile episodes will oversee a freakish smile on your face,

Undeniably you will be bound to move rearward at a rapid pace.

 

 

Once you perceive this truth, the combat seems invincible,

Arduously you would obtain relations like those, someday it will turn amicable.

 

 

it could be geographical segregation but not incongruity of souls,

utterly, it's a worthwhile development and passageway of the new roles !!

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I have often wondered how I would cope with migration. The separation from everything I have ever known and friends and family would be almost impossible for me to deal with. I have to say I admire those who have the fortitude to do it. The pull for a better or safer life would have to be incredibly strong. A fine write which is thought provoking Abhishek.

Chris

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thanks for your kind visit.. I am glad you liked it !

[Jessica Lima]

Reward at a rapid pace is a sin we all partake in. I can see how such a thing can cause distance but also growth. Very complex poem. I became a little smarter by reading it :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

emphasis was made to fall on the reason and its was actually complex... well, thanks for your kind words jessica !!

[Surya]

Sometimes it does feel so..but face it..:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

Yes.. that's exactly my object was... I described the mixed emotions that usually strikes on mind but at the end of the day should focus on positives... Thanks for reading

[Lavi]

Really Touchy Lines! i am also facing same after being migrated.....

[Abhishek Asthana]

yes, one could easily relate who has gone with the same situation... thanks a lot

[Ayush Mishra]

"it could be geographical segregation but not incongruity of souls,
utterly, it's a worthwhile development and passageway of the new roles" ....so true...

[Abhishek Asthana]

exactly...thanks for understanding the intensity...

[Joey Nizz]

I liked the flow and rhythm of this piece, your selection of words were spot on and it made your writing ignite it self for the readers to see the vision between its lines.

Thanks for sharing, I have enjoyed reading this.

[Abhishek Asthana]

that's a great encouragement,,, really motivates me to write few more pieces like that... thank you so much for reading...it means a lot for me

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome, Im glad you got inspired to write more!

[Najam Us Saher]

This poem seems like a true event. Such descriptive and easy flowing this poem sounded. I liked the flow and the rhythm. Beautifully written.

[Abhishek Asthana]

i can relate it with myself only as i had to leave my native place... moving down to an entirely different place is quite challenging... thanks for your words...m very glad you liked it :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. What's your native place ?

[Abhishek Asthana]

that i already mentioned in my profile... its lucknow (city of nawabs).. hahaha

[Najam Us Saher]

And where did you migrate to ?

[Abhishek Asthana]

to Delhi NCR.. its been quite sometime

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh okay....

[Mr.Writer]

Very nice! The rhymes weren't forced, I also felt they flew well.
It felt nice reading something different :)
Keep it up!

[Abhishek Asthana]

it usually happens with most of the people who seek out to establish themselves outside... i am glad you liked it... thank you so much for reading

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)