Ek Tarfaa

i adore u always,, bt sometimes i wonder if i m on ur mind as much u r on mine

Chaahne ka tujhe shauk tha kab hume,,

Par nafrat bhi tujhse ki jaati nahi hai..

 

Rubaroo hote jab tum ho to meri nazrein,,

Tujhse hatkar kahin aur jaati nahi hai..

 

Rahon me zindagi ki meri tum nahi,,

Tere bin manzilein nazar aati nahi hai..

 

Tum bhi ye sochte ho kya mere liye??

Yaa tumhe yaad meri satati nahi hai ??

 

Ek tarfaah sahi par muhabbat to hai,,

Ye tasalli ab himmat badati nahi hai..

 

Izhar apne ishq ka hum karde magar,,

Dil se dehshat me mere duur jaati nahi hai..

 

Tod na de tu dil mera berehmi se,,

Ke muqaddar se ranjish li jaati nahi hai..

 

Barso ki apni chaahat jo humne chupaayi...

Seene me dafan ab ki jaati nahi hai !!!

Reviews

[Pravir]

Wah sayar sabb. . . kya khoob likha hai . . . . kuchh sabdo ne sach me apki shAyari me jan dal di hai . . . itni sanjeedgi se har ek ehsas ko sajaya hai ki dil chho liya . . bura na mano to apki shayri kisi ko impress krne k liye chura skta hu . . . ??
Sayad isi k jariye khus ho jae . . . wase mera ar poems se dur tk koi rishta ni . . . na hi likh paata hu na utna roochi hai par kuchh aise hote h jo dil chho lete hai . . ar ye apka unhi me se ek hai . . mere jaise romantic insan k liye apke traf se ye gift hi smjh rha hu. . . . bhut khoob . . umeed krta hu aisi damdar sayri se aap yunhi apna pyar bantte rho . .

[Abhishek Asthana]

arey ye to hamari izzat-hafzai hai... kisi romantic insaan ki shayri kisi aur romantic insaan k jara b kaam aaye to isse acchi kya bat... lekin ise padkar agar wo thoda b khush ho jaye to ham aapse return gift lenge... haha... just kidding... shukriyaa :)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

No words only tears in my eyes
It's so relatable and heart touching!

Keep it up dear :)

[Swetha]

Spellbound. Great writing...

[Avinash]

Kabil-E-Tarif Shayari/Ghazal.

[Abhishek Asthana]

bohot bohot shukria avinash ji :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

i love this..i love it totally...this is so wonderful..the one sided love and the meaning it gives..each line is written with pure urdu lafz and this makes it more mesmerizing and appealing, i love the way you have written the poem in a rhyming way and overall..this made my heart melt!

[Abhishek Asthana]

i am feeling really honored, the way you appreciated... bht hi meethi zubaan hai urdu, bht hi adab se bhari... and i really love this tongue...

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thank you so much..yes, it is and i love this language too!

[horizon]

oh...my goodness it's such a lovely work...i read it twice..it is beautiful..the rhyming,every second line has the same work and it is really a art to put words together in such way that they end similar...i loved the selection of your words too good..bht hi accha samjhaya ek tarfa pyar apne...

[Abhishek Asthana]

it was an attempt to show the confused, impatient state of mind of the lovers, when the affection proved out to be one-sided... i am very glad u liked it.. thanks for reading :)

[Divyani]

Well done, u have beautifully described the one sided love. Its lovely

[Abhishek Asthana]

might be upto some extent I am able to describe...it's not easy to describe a one-sided devotion... M glad you liked it

[Lavi]

woooow!..Nice ...
Dear, Love is life however don't do it........

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank u so much lavi... m happy u liked it

[Najam Us Saher]

Waah....every word came from depths of your heart. I truly liked this a lot.

[Abhishek Asthana]

something i wanted to write down on internal collapse in relationships due to inexplicable reason... m glad u liked it... thank u so much

[Najam Us Saher]

You have done it wonderfully. You are most welcome ☺

[Surya]

That's perfect, I loved last lines...:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

me too,, thank u soo much surya for reading :)