Stimulus

Self-motivation only acts as an aid to overcome from several worries, mostly from confused mind.

Why did this happen to me when I feel ?,
It's a pain sort of, which never gets heal.


It seems sorrowful sun shines like a fire,
These dismal evenings, I don't admire.


In sake of fine shadow I wander everywhere,
But really it's betrayed, in a world of sphere.


Now what to do I don't realize,
I think should carry on, or should I be more precise.


Stop worrying, it happens, could called as a trend,
Everyday is a beginning, it never was an end !!

Reviews

[wordman]

there is no beginning,there is no end, great writ

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks a lot sir...

[L.C. Jarrette]

Everyday is a beginning, it never was an end !!

=> i love this line...

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much... i am glad you liked it :)

[L.C. Jarrette]

i'm your no.1 fan remember?
:D

[Abhishek Asthana]

haha,, thats a great honor to me... thanks a ton :)

[Hope]

"Everyday is a beginning, it never was an end !! "
I remind myself it every time I feel depressed.
A really encouraging poem Abhishek!
Keep writing!

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much,,, most of the time i write negative stuff so a huge compliment for me..

[Hope]

My pleasure..:)

[durgesh]

awesome poetic lines..
it made me to look back at some memories and think for a while...

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much durgesh

[writ rajat]

amazing write with a poetic structure known by few people

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thanks a lot... m glad you liked it

[APOORVA]

An intensity of this poem has some another level i much mention.
What a classy writing.

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thank you so much...I really don't know whether it's classy or not..but I 'll try to convey some more messages through my writing...

[Paradox]

Fantastic verse..... Intense depth....and the ending that's awesomeee.
Now what to do I don't realize,
I think should carry on, or should I be more precise.


Stop worrying, it happens, could called as a trend,
Everyday is a beginning, it never was an end !!

The poem does n't end here. Nor, its a tragedy. Its a hope. Its a lesson. For them who r depressed , for them who have lost path. The poem is so intense.
I would like to tell one thing.
U have got a great talent in u.
People write poems, they may be rhythmic but they r not like this piece.
U have got the charm in it, u have what it takes. Just go on, without being precise. Best wishes

[Abhishek Asthana]

well, I am a very common writer... just I always want to impart what exactly we are witnessing theses days, how the things are transformed afterwards...I am glad you understood the aura of the poem...thanks a lot for reading... it means a lot

[Mamta Sonowal]

Amazing...u hve a true potential to writing...

[Abhishek Asthana]

Not really... always try to phrases wat something is inside or what I can imagine upto best of my perception level...That's it... thanks a lot

[Mamta Sonowal]

ur welc'me...