I miss my mother

Truly said, no matters how old we get we always want our mum when we don't feel good...

Mum, o my mum where have you gone ?After your departure, life seems as vigorous cyclone...



I do remember the days when we were together,
Thereafter what almighty did cut down my feather.
Sometime what I felt they took you in fallacy,
How could they were so rude, it was not their legacy.
Just thought what was amiss, mine everything was finished,
We too were a happy family, I was a child unblemished.



Mum, o my mum where have you gone ?
After your departure, life seems as vigorous cyclone...



Missed you sorely in my highs and lows,
If I orate a lot about it, certainly my tears flows.
Eyes are searching yet, memories are still vivid,
Do protect me again when I behave like timid.
Now I am displeased, this entire world looks dumb,
Promise me, u would return, or stay there I 'll come.



Mum, o my mum where have you gone ?
After your departure, life seems as vigorous cyclone !!..

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Missed you sorely in my highs and lows,
If I orate a lot about it, certainly my tears flows.
Eyes are searching yet, memories are still vivid,
Do protect me again when I behave like timid.
Now I am displeased, this entire world looks dumb,
Promise me, u would return, or stay there I 'll come. Mum, o my mum where have you gone ?
After your departure, life seems as vigorous cyclone !!..
I can relate to these lines. I can understand the emotions and the misery in this poem. I loved this one truly expressed those feelings.

[Abhishek Asthana]

Yups... this poem is really close to my heart... tells about some sudden pains which are sometimes unexplainable...M glad you liked

[Najam Us Saher]

I can understand even if there are no words said.....

[KT-B]

I can certainly relate to this having lost my mum too - life will never be as good without our wee mammies and no-one will ever love us as much - I too can never dwell on the loss too much or like you, the tears would never stop....

[Abhishek Asthana]

Yup... I can understand...mom title is just above the world... I miss those soft and comforting hugs very badly...