I miss my mother

Truly said, no matters how old we get we always want our mum when we don't feel good...

Mum, o my mum where have you gone ?After your departure, life seems as vigorous cyclone...



I do remember the days when we were together,
Thereafter what almighty did cut down my feather.
Sometime what I felt they took you in fallacy,
How could they were so rude, it was not their legacy.
Just thought what was amiss, mine everything was finished,
We too were a happy family, I was a child unblemished.



Mum, o my mum where have you gone ?
After your departure, life seems as vigorous cyclone...



Missed you sorely in my highs and lows,
If I orate a lot about it, certainly my tears flows.
Eyes are searching yet, memories are still vivid,
Do protect me again when I behave like timid.
Now I am displeased, this entire world looks dumb,
Promise me, u would return, or stay there I 'll come.



Mum, o my mum where have you gone ?
After your departure, life seems as vigorous cyclone !!..

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Missed you sorely in my highs and lows,
If I orate a lot about it, certainly my tears flows.
Eyes are searching yet, memories are still vivid,
Do protect me again when I behave like timid.
Now I am displeased, this entire world looks dumb,
Promise me, u would return, or stay there I 'll come. Mum, o my mum where have you gone ?
After your departure, life seems as vigorous cyclone !!..
I can relate to these lines. I can understand the emotions and the misery in this poem. I loved this one truly expressed those feelings.

[Abhishek Asthana]

Yups... this poem is really close to my heart... tells about some sudden pains which are sometimes unexplainable...M glad you liked

[Najam Us Saher]

I can understand even if there are no words said.....

[Raj Sahu]

Marvellous work indeed! Wow, it's just too good. You wrote with a bitter experience which is being reflecting in your poem. I too feel your sentiments here. Keep writing. 😊

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks for ur kind words raj... m glad u liked it :)

[Priyanshi]

The last stanza of the poem is wonderful.
"Missed you sorely in my highs and lows,....
.......promise me, u would return, or stay there I 'll come."... beautiful lines.
A child without its mother is incomplete....keep it up.

[Abhishek Asthana]

exactly... totally agreed with this point nd unfortunately m one of them... thank u so much for reading

[Priyanshi]

Stay strong my friend.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ah...a wonderful poem...i loved it and this was a very sad feeling that anyone could actually express....nice work abhishek.

[Abhishek Asthana]

its like as i am reciting this poem since my childhood as i missed her every moment,,, having mother is just like a boon for everyone...thanks for reading

[Sonakshi Arora]

You write so deep! She will be truly proud of you :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

she must be watching over me from the heaven and i hope, she should be happy... thank you for reading

[Sonakshi Arora]

It always a pleasure to read your works! I assure that she is definitely proud of her son :)

[Lavi]

Main Kabhi Batlaata Nahi, Par Andhere Se Darta Hoon Main Maa
Yuun To Main Dikhlaata Nahi, Teri Parwaah Karta Hoon Main Maa
Tujhe Sab Hai Pata, Hai Na Maa
Tujhe Sab Hai Pata... Meri Maa

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank u so much lavi... i have been reciting this song since almost 9 years when it was released...

[Surya]

Ohh, Abhishek!, you okay now...
Mom's are wonderful, even I miss my mom as an stay out of home for months...
I could relate, Thanks foe sharing such emotion...:)...I enjoyed..:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank u so much surya...

[Divyani]

Stay hare only, ur mom wont like if u go there. Dear ur need is here. After ur mom, u r the base of family

[Abhishek Asthana]

sometimes the pain seems unbearable... now everything is baseless, whether it's about my faith or family

[Divya]

That's beautiful i must say 👏

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thanks a lot

[heartspeaks]

Thereafter what almighty did cut down my feather.
Just thought what was amiss, mine everything was finished,
Eyes are searching yet, memories are still vivid,
These lines just shook me....It is so overwhelming and beautiful....
MOTHER is the greatest treasure of all..

and this line below just made me feel like someone has taken my feelings and phrased it exactly the same..
"Promise me, u would return, or stay there I 'll come"..
I loved it...It is emotional and full of love and memories...
Great infact .... its a MOTHERLY WRITE... loved it.

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thanks a lot for going through the depth of the poem... Even I was bit emotional when I was phrashing it down... just to notify a someone who is in heaven that she s so missed... M very glad u liked it...

[heartspeaks]

i know that feeling very well. Life moves on but the pain always remains just as fresh. STAY STRONG . glad atleast you had the courage to pen it down. All can't. ALL THE BEST

[Ayush Mishra]

I don't know...what to say here..just I can say..I wish to hug you..like the same way, I can !!!

[Abhishek Asthana]

Sure buddy... u 're always welcome

[Abhishek Asthana]

Sure buddy... u 're always welcome