Suroor

Totally moved by....

Maikhaane se chchoote h to pyaas abi kyu baaki hai...

Wajood apna to bhul gye teri yaad abi kyu baaki hai...

Gairo ne pucha naam pta to keh dia malum nhi...

Muzahir ko humdardi ka ehsaas abi kyu baaki hai...

Fir b na maani haar hum bhatke andheri galiyon me...

Kehne ko zinda laash h hum fir saas abi kyu baaki h !!!

Reviews

[Anjali]

Wow.... Beautiful! It's so good.. amazing!

[Priyanshi]

"....Fir b na maani haar hum bhatke andheri galiyon me...

Kehne ko zinda laash h hum fir saas abi kyu baaki h !!! ".... These lines touched me.
Ending part is great.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanku so much priyanshi

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[Raj Sahu]

Good! I like it. Keep it up.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks a lot...m glad u liked it

[APOORVA]

waah kya bat hai bahot khoob, bahot khoob :)
arz kiya hai..

"ishrat-e-qatra hai dariya me fanaa ho jana
dard ka hadd se guzarna hai dawa ho jana"

[Abhishek Asthana]

Extremely well... ur inputs added grace to it...thnq !!

[APOORVA]

keep up the good job sir.

[Ayush Mishra]

good choice of words.....

[Abhishek Asthana]

Thanks buddy