With You My Love

A little song

Calling you always fails

Reaching you has no avail

Why must our love be dead?

Is there any way I could be in bed

With you my love

 

Calling you always fails

Reaching you has no avail

Why must our love be dead?

Is there any way I could be in bed

With you my love

With you my love

With you my love

 

 

Calling you always fails

Reaching you has no avail

I still care for you

Why must you make me blue?

Is there anything I could do?

To savior my lovely beau

With you my love

With you my love

With you my love

Reviews

[Emberlorna]

A beautifully penned piece that is full of emotion. Very nice :}

[Alex Hunter]

Thank you very much :)

[Alejandra]

The words are bittersweet and honest. I liek the repeating lines. Nice song write. :)

[Alex Hunter]

Thank you :) it's based on true events (sigh) but I'm glad you enjoyed it

[justjenn_2u]

You wrote a song. It's bittersweet in words and the love is prevalent and well expressed through honesty. RESPECT>

[Alex Hunter]

Thank you for your review :) I'm very glad you enjoyed it

[Holly Mason]

very nice write
with you my love...like the repeating line
thank you so much for sharing

[Alex Hunter]

I'm glad you enjoyed it :) you're very welcome