What Goes on Inside the Mind of Air

What Goes on Inside the Mind of Air

A Poem by Alex Hunter
"

Just that

"
Apparently she lives on love street
A place so many seek
I hear weird people talk about
So maybe it's not all that good
Sometimes I feel as if love street was transparent
And made of purple rice
I could not see it coming at me
As for it was invisible
But I knew it was round
And for those who think the world revolves around them
It's not my fault 
You have stars in your hair
So may my wishes of clouds on pineapple rocks be true
But so much things have gone by my head
That you are the only one I think of

© 2012 Alex Hunter


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Alex Hunter
Wrote this last year

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MAC
this is creative...like writing while taking LSD. actually like this, could be how love makes us mindless.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alex Hunter

11 Years Ago

It's very possible that love could make us mindless. Thanks for the review Mark :)
no idea as well but makes it interesting thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alex Hunter

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)
ha this makes sense to me, is that bad? ;-)

Enjoyed the read...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alex Hunter

11 Years Ago

Lol, I don't think its bad at all :) glad you enjoyed it
Nothing weirder than a Doors fan ;-) Interesting write, this. I'm with Mary down there...no earthly idea what the hell you're talking about, but I rather enjoyed the telling. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alex Hunter

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your review :) to be honest, I have no idea what I was writing at that time. Then again. .. read more
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

It soooooo does :-D My pleasure.
Not sure what its exactly about but I love the words anyway

Posted 11 Years Ago


Alex Hunter

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your review :) I'm glad you liked the words. No idea what it means though :O

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Alex Hunter
Alex Hunter

Palm Coast, FL



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