A New Me

A New Me

A Poem by SPUDNIC
"

a little bit of anger

"

I want to be something, not just another forgotten face but, I’m too scared to meet people, let alone for them to remember me, or even have a lasting impact on them can’t even think of 7 billion others yet.

I need a connection to life,

a completely new view,

to see this world in a new, brighter light

I want to be a leader,

a guide of new things to come,

a representation,

a symbol,

to stop this never ending affliction,

to cool this boiling pot,

But, what do i have to do to become this new idea?

This new revolution?

Its like my brain can’t do it.

So then ill have to change my brain cause this revolution is inevitable

but, what if that changes the revolutions it wants to create?

I want to be something,

I want to make a change in this world,

i need a statement so strong it will rise above the other 7 billion trying to get to

the top as badly as me

My thoughts, ideas, and motivations are now cooling down

maybe if i could keep them long enough i could make things, do things, that i

would full out abuse


thanks if you read the whole thing

- Hector Zepeda

© 2016 SPUDNIC


Author's Note

SPUDNIC
first thank you if you read the whole thing and tell me if you liked it this is my first writing so tell me if there is any thing wrong with my writings or if there is too much cursing

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Welcome Hector Zepeda ! It is such a pleasure reading the work of a 14 year old "man".
A very welcome thought and a nice execution of it.
Yes, your writing is good. So keep posting without hesitation and delay.
Put I'll in place of ill in the line " so then I guess". Typing errors are common with all of us.
I loved the lines ; " I need a connection ........brighter light. In fact your whole write is beautiful
Thanks for Sharing, SPUDNIC.. Keep sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SPUDNIC

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much i was afraid that i wouldnt get a response from anyone you're also very nice thanks



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Welcome Hector Zepeda ! It is such a pleasure reading the work of a 14 year old "man".
A very welcome thought and a nice execution of it.
Yes, your writing is good. So keep posting without hesitation and delay.
Put I'll in place of ill in the line " so then I guess". Typing errors are common with all of us.
I loved the lines ; " I need a connection ........brighter light. In fact your whole write is beautiful
Thanks for Sharing, SPUDNIC.. Keep sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SPUDNIC

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much i was afraid that i wouldnt get a response from anyone you're also very nice thanks

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Added on October 22, 2016
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SPUDNIC
SPUDNIC

Austin, TX



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I'm a 14 year old man! i have been told that my writings good so i wanted to share it enjoy or tell me if you don't there are sculptures of ideas everywhere so i want to see some too. more..

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