Inside Me

Inside me

Resides the

Fuel to the fire

Holding me higher

 

Provide me

What I need

Spark the ignition

Start the transition

 

Start switching settings

Still searching subsurface

Something still sits

Somewhere safe’n’sound

 

Startled, staring skyward

Striking, sinful spiral

Seeking, sterile slate

So setting self straight

 

Somehow

Someway

Someone

Someday

 

I’ll have everything that I need

All I need to proceed

Pushing past these box walls

No fear for those pitfalls

 

And I’ll destroy the cages

In which my mind now rages

I will spark I’ll ignite

I will start I’ll excite

I’m not sure if I’m right

But I look for that light

And tonight I just might

Just fight for that right

To have that insight

To flee from my plight

As I scream and take flight

Straight out into the night

 

Somehow

Someway

Someone

Someday

 

I’ll have everything that I need

All I need to proceed

Pushing past these box walls

No fear for those pitfalls

 

Hold my head up high

I’ve no tears left to cry

With my eyes to the ground below

My heart rate slowly starts to grow

As I finally realize just who is my foe

 

It’s me

Now I see

Plain to be

My enemy

Yeah

It’s me

 

I could play this world so bad

But with this fear unfurled, so sad

I’ve remained stagnant, so mad

 

It’s me

Now I see

Plain to be

My enemy

Yeah

It’s me

 

Somehow

Someway

Someone

Someday

 

I’ll have everything that I need

All I need to proceed

Pushing past these box walls

No fear for those pitfalls

 

No longer will I wait

Self pity on my plate

Excuses my best mate

And lies that I now hate

 

It was for this that I was born

At the moment I am torn

But I’m meant to be reborn

To mend what was once broken

What was silent now outspoken

And myself I will have formed

 

Finally free

Fear forgotten

Fails forgiven

Finally me

 

Somehow

Someway

Someone

Today

 

I have everything that I need

All I need to proceed

Pushing past these box walls

No fear for those pitfalls

 

Sought out, sterile slate

So set myself straight

I know it’s not too late

To put pride on my plate

 

Reviews

[Aaron]

I like it. But i need to know about the style of the song. Fast? Slow? Medium? There's a lot of lyrics to this song so i think something to the tempo of "A Little Piece of Heaven" with slow, med, and fast parts would work good with this stuff. I don't know what you had in mind when you wrote it, but I'm already anxious to work on it with you. Gladly would play acoustic, lead, or rhythm for you, but let me say, this song could use one of those sick slow solo's. But you know me, im a solo-maniac. Ill come over one day and we'll come up with something. The lyrics are powerful though. Nice Job :)

[Placenta]

this is beautiful. Very "Heaven" By Los Lonely Boys lol. I can see this as being a song. are you a songwriter?
Your flow is very melodic

[7h3fr34k]

Yeah I plan on writing a guitar part for it. Maybe even some drums but I only have a program to work with, no drumset. I do have a keyboard tho so I'll see what I can do with that. Glad you guys like it!
Thanks :)

-7h3fr34k

[B A S S E M A S H R A F]

wow, i realy loved it

you should start singing it :D

i wish to read more from you

good job anyway :D

[A]

WOW! This was REALLY good! I can see this as being a song. I don't even know what more to say...it was just a great poem! :)