I apologize

I apologize

A Poem by Kat-Marie Berti

I apologize to you

For all the things that were not true

Wishing you would throw forgiveness

A soft kiss or hug or hand

But baby you just keep on walking

Never stop to look on back

I'm alone and you're not with me

And my heart is slowly dying inside

© 2008 Kat-Marie Berti


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Oh, how I can relate to this because I have been the fool that has kept walking far too many times - never stopping long enough to look back. I think, in hindsight, with the eyes of those from whom I have walked away. Time has taught me to not be so cruel. No one deserves complete silence from me or, for that matter, anyone else.

Wonderful work, Kat-Marie!

:o)

Dirk

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I think everyone can relate to this. We've all been on one side of it or another, and both sides cut deep. a wonderful portrayal of that pain. Good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



This a very powerful piece of writing. Speaking from personal experience, nobody should ever walk away.

Good work.

- Neo

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, how I can relate to this because I have been the fool that has kept walking far too many times - never stopping long enough to look back. I think, in hindsight, with the eyes of those from whom I have walked away. Time has taught me to not be so cruel. No one deserves complete silence from me or, for that matter, anyone else.

Wonderful work, Kat-Marie!

:o)

Dirk

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is lovely. and painful.



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sad and I too hate that when that happens, nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hear ya there.. I hate that when that happens.. powerful purge here...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kat-Marie Berti
Kat-Marie Berti

Nostalgic, Canada



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