How will we make it

How will we make it, such sadness that we live in

I cry every night and you don’t even know it

Evil is soaked up by this life and what can I do

Just want to love you, never let you go

If one day you don’t want me no more and decide to leave

My heart will crush closed and vanish

I will never be me anymore, just a ghost of who I once was

I care so much, makes me ache when you’re gone

Why can’t you just stay with me for good

I can’t stand the pain of being alone anymore

 

Reviews

[Rachel DeHart]

Again, you amaze me with this poem..
I know these lines you speak so well, but you spill them her much more gracefully than I could hope to achieve myself.
And this last part is breath taking
"My heart will crush closed and vanish
I will never be me anymore, just a ghost of who I once was
I care so much, makes me ache when you're gone
Why can't you just stay with me for good
I can't stand the pain of being alone anymore"

[Julienne Norris]

The emotion in this poem is amazing. Altthough I have never had this same exerience I am very familiar with the emotion over a man.
"Why can't you just stay with me for good
I can't stand the pain of being alone anymore"