Angel at your mercy

I am the angel at your mercy

You call me your one and only

Pour my love upon your soul

Turn to gold what once was coal

 

Reviews

[The Tao of Bri]

Beuatiful devotion and openness...surrendering yourself to Love is never wrong...for it is the only way to know if it is true...they either will love you or leave you, then you wil know if it is real or a false idol. I really like this poem alot... give them all the rope they need they either hang themselves or make friendship bracelets...and in the understanding of which it is all will be healed. "To err is humna, forgiveness divine"

[Dionysus Cain]

simple, but it packs a punch of emotion, which i like.

[FANTASYKNIGHT]

It's a very short and sweet poem, but in my opinion, i would have used "turn to diamond what once was coal"
only cause it makes scientificaly more sense, haha, but thats just me, weird and random. very good short and sweet.

[Greg Close]

This would actually be a great song lyric (or at least the start to one). The rhyme and rhythm would be perfect set to music, and it's very strong imagery you've built too.

[Ravenskald]

It's nice , and very sweet but I'd like it to be developed :), open yes , complete no. As part of a greater work ( for example in a novel) this has a place. I'm not sure there is enough for it to stand on its own
~raven

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is exceptionally brilliant! I specially loved the closing line a lot which is imparting such a great feel in it...This also reminds of one of the songs by One republic, Great work overall!