It hurts

When I don’t see you

I feel so far away from you

As if I am living two lives

One with you, one alone

And it hurts me inside

To not be with you every day

Not wake up beside you

Every morning of my life

 

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

taken on the physical sense of this; distance and missing the one you love. Always having a part of you with them. This could also be taken on a different level though; on caught in the middle of a relationship, unsure which way to turn. living two lives - one there in the present with the one they love; one elsewhere, seeking something ....unknown. :-)

[JadedSparrow]

The pain you speak of is so real to me. I have recently stepped away from the "love of my life" and the agony of waking up each day to realize that Im alone makes me want to scream. Truly marvelous...

JS

[samuel austin]

great work. this shows allot of emotion and yet its so simple..

[The Tao of Bri]

blistering...on so many levels..

[Ray Hamilton]

Missing the one you love is always hard
Great write
Ray

[MagicHearted Knight]

I like the simple elegance and flow of this piece. You have conveyed so very much with so few words, I am taken back by its genuineness. WOW!